aralias and I are in slight dispute as to whether a particular bit of a Crane Wife Chapter 6 sex scene /works/. Can I get a second opinion? Anyone want to look at this?
if it's just about that word choice, i think in general, the doctor wouldn't appreciate it, but in particular - the master is really pushing his luck given what the doctor said to him last time they met.
Word choice, yes, but I thought you disagreed with that whole /bit./
Hm. I hadn't thought about it like that re: luck-pushing, but as to appreciating it, I mean, it's an illogical idiosyncratic kink thing? Which perhaps I need to talk out with Anyone Not You so as not to die of embarrassment. :p
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Date: 2010-01-26 02:49 pm (UTC)Uhhh.....did I miss the end of the Three era Christmas story? <.
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Date: 2010-01-26 02:53 pm (UTC)if it's just about that word choice, i think in general, the doctor wouldn't appreciate it, but in particular - the master is really pushing his luck given what the doctor said to him last time they met.
if it's something else, then i repeat: are we?
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Date: 2010-01-26 03:01 pm (UTC)Hm. I hadn't thought about it like that re: luck-pushing, but as to appreciating it, I mean, it's an illogical idiosyncratic kink thing? Which perhaps I need to talk out with Anyone Not You so as not to die of embarrassment. :p