A Gentlewomen's Dispute

[x_losfic]

aralias and I are in slight dispute as to whether a particular bit of a Crane Wife Chapter 6 sex scene /works/. Can I get a second opinion? Anyone want to look at this?

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[skipthedemon.livejournal.com]

I'm free today.

Uhhh.....did I miss the end of the Three era Christmas story? <.

[deborah-judge.livejournal.com]

Sure.

[aralias.livejournal.com]

are we?

if it's just about that word choice, i think in general, the doctor wouldn't appreciate it, but in particular - the master is really pushing his luck given what the doctor said to him last time they met.

if it's something else, then i repeat: are we?

[x-losfic.livejournal.com]

No. That's, er, a funny story. Or a tragic one, you pick...

[skipthedemon.livejournal.com]

While I'm admittedly curious, nuff said. *hugs* It was a very lovely story!

[x-losfic.livejournal.com]

Word choice, yes, but I thought you disagreed with that whole /bit./

Hm. I hadn't thought about it like that re: luck-pushing, but as to appreciating it, I mean, it's an illogical idiosyncratic kink thing? Which perhaps I need to talk out with Anyone Not You so as not to die of embarrassment. :p

[x-losfic.livejournal.com]

Sent!

[x-losfic.livejournal.com]

It's still getting finished, I'm just not sure when.

[reasonabsurd.livejournal.com]

Next Christmas? :)